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You Slowly Disappear

Long before you're gone, some have said goodbye; they start to look beyond you as you age. You slowly disappear before you die. They look you up and down; subtly imply you're no longer fit to earn a real wage. Long before you're gone, some have said goodbye. Looking back with fondness and a little sigh once, who and what you are were all the rage; you slowly disappear before you die No longer star or even the standby; before you knew it, shifted off the stage. Long before you're gone, some have said goodbye. Although beyond belief, you can't deny; the younger in your book; have turned the page. You slowly disappear before you die. The sun, though low, still glimmers in the sky so why, you ask yourself with just outrage, long before you're gone, some have said goodbye? You slowly disappear before you die.

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Date: 5/2/2022 10:22:00 AM
True, Terry, true. At an earlier point in my life, there might have been quite a few at my funeral, now, not so many, and can't say I care that much! I won't be there, why should they?!? Enjoyed your poem, thanks
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/24/2022 12:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jeff, I agree with your sentiments entirely.
Date: 5/2/2022 10:00:00 AM
...not the same as "riding off in to the sunset"....Great job with the villanelle.
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/24/2022 12:18:00 AM
No, just fade to gray, thank you John for your visit and kind comments.
Date: 5/2/2022 8:21:00 AM
Marvelous villanelle, Terry. And so true! As I have aged (now 80) I have observed the truth you so eloquently point out in your poem. Fine writing!
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/24/2022 12:21:00 AM
Hi Milton, thank you for your kind comments, your work is always my inspiration, have not concentrated on PS for a while I had a couple of exhibitions of my Sculptures to prepare for; I hope to get back into the swing and read more on here soon.

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