You See Him Standing There

You see him from across the room
He is so perfect
You know that you are doomed
He can make your emotions get wrecked
You still waltz over his way
Life seems so much better
You and him want to stay
He drops a block letter
Life seems to have no reason
You can never love again
You move to the next season
All gone is the pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 25, 2016 at 11:10 PM
NICE TO S EE THIS O NE A G A I N.....S K A T
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December 6, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Darby, congratulations on your win!
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December 4, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Wonderful poem and win Darby... big congrats!
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December 4, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Darby, Congratulations on your sweet win. Enjoyed your entry. LUV SKAT
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November 23, 2015 at 12:10 PM
- A great first poem, I look forward to become more familiar with your poems in the future - Welcome to "The soup", Darby - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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November 20, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Hi Darby, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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November 20, 2015 at 3:01 AM
Darby WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 19, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Darby, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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