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You See Him Standing There

You see him from across the room He is so perfect You know that you are doomed He can make your emotions get wrecked You still waltz over his way Life seems so much better You and him want to stay He drops a block letter Life seems to have no reason You can never love again You move to the next season All gone is the pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/25/2016 11:10:00 PM
NICE TO S EE THIS O NE A G A I N.....S K A T
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:44:00 PM
Darby, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/4/2015 11:09:00 PM
Wonderful poem and win Darby... big congrats!
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Date: 12/4/2015 10:02:00 PM
Darby, Congratulations on your sweet win. Enjoyed your entry. LUV SKAT
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Date: 11/23/2015 12:10:00 PM
- A great first poem, I look forward to become more familiar with your poems in the future - Welcome to "The soup", Darby - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2015 11:40:00 PM
Hi Darby, this is such an excellent first posting! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:01:00 AM
Darby WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:06:00 PM
Darby, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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