You See

You wait all your life
for a moment like this.
To be there for her,
and live a life with some bliss.
Walking down a busy street
in the heart of New York.
Seeing women walking by
but one gives you a feeling of torque.
They've warned you about a woman's love,
how others have made it torn.
She may look like a rose right now,
but watch out for the thorns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 17, 2008 at 6:29 PM
I reckon thats real good advice in most cases - Great job on this poem it made me smile - God Bless
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