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You wait all your life for a moment like this. To be there for her, and live a life with some bliss. Walking down a busy street in the heart of New York. Seeing women walking by but one gives you a feeling of torque. They've warned you about a woman's love, how others have made it torn. She may look like a rose right now, but watch out for the thorns.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/17/2008 6:29:00 PM
I reckon thats real good advice in most cases - Great job on this poem it made me smile - God Bless
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