You Said It Was Just Halloween

You said it’s just the night relax unwind
But whispers cut like static through the mind

You said it’s just the kids the jokes the play
But footsteps trailed and never walked away

You said it’s just the wind behind the door
But air grew thick and colder than before 

You said it’s just the moon the silver haze
But every street was smoke and phantom blaze

You said it’s just the dark it hides the town
But eyes lit up when all the lights went down

You said it’s just a dream the fear the fun
But dawn came slow and found the street undone

You said it’s just a tale forget move on
But some of us still swear we heard that song

You said it’s just one night it fades by noon
Then something laughed beneath the dying moon
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:46 PM
haunting poem that speaks to our fears of the unknown. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 3:21 PM
Nicely done!
Greenhough Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 7:13 AM
Halloween has a magic of its own. Your poem has an underlying tension that heightens the vague fears of the unknown. I liked this very much.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 3:11 AM
Christopher, they say that Halloween isn’t true, but I have heard that laugh beneath the dying moon, same as you did too… Beryl
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