You Ripped My Heart In Pieces

You said that you loved me
But I knew that really couldnt be

I am treated worthlessly cause I am
I wanna put my pistol to my head and let it go BAM!

I am slicing open my arms deeper than ever
I know it doesnt make things better

I cry and wait for my dying day to come
Instead of me becoming a worthless bum....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Megens Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 1:49 PM
you need to get over him he is occupying too much of your time i been there and my life was pure hell unless you convince yourself hes the past your gonna ruin your future keep writing girly girl
Loveless Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 11:42 AM
dont ever let this poem come true. stay alive.
Lachica Avatar
May 11, 2009 at 7:52 AM
A dark way to end...but a great write Ghost Gurl.
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