You Remain Gone

Everytime I find the peace
The silence makes my heart sliced
I guess the fact doesn’t fit the wish
Even after I paid the price

All will be ashamed
Cos you remain gone
The beast never been tamed
And my sun never been found
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Clark Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:26 AM
"The silence makes my heart sliced" great line. Great poem
Falotico Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Nice poetic flow to it.....Michael
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