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You Or the Sun

If I had to chose between you or the sun, The days and nights would be eternally dark and cold, But you would be warm as I would keep you in my arms or atleast stand with you by your side for as long as I could. And you do not need to see me to know I will always be yours if you want me. And you do not need to see me to know I will always be here for you. And you do not need to see me to know I will always love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/29/2010 10:06:00 AM
Beautiful!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:36:00 AM
Lovely Hazel.. so enjoyed your creative write today..with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:30:00 AM
Very romantic ,and a nice choice, loved your warmness in the poem. Even if there is no sun to provide it for you,,, your loved one will do just fine,..enjoyed,..p..d
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