Junice Lanza Poet Narrative

You Noticing

You noticing me crying
You noticing me being happy
You noticing me being depressed
You noticing my smile
You noticing my frecklce
You noticing my brown eyes
You noticing my pretty face
You noticing my feelings
You noticing my shyness
You noticing me blushing
You noticing my braveness
You noticing my courage

You noticing me!

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Poet Destroyer A August 2, 2010 at 8:41 PM Clever and cute, i see the bright side of your poem,, but a down moment when you start your poem. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

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