You Need Your Pack

One Lone wolf Without its Pack will end up Sorry and alone; For the pack will Save its hide, Alone… Doom!

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/12/2018 8:08:00 AM

Just had to read this one, of course... And it's fascinating to me -- for you have penned the truth not only about creatures, but about human (Wolfs) too. I come from no family (for various reasons). When, one December night, my ex-wife literally locked me out of the I had struggled to help build, I was lone wolf. Felt hunted for years! (Happy ending, though: remarried and built another family. This one's intact). Thanks for the thought-provoking write/read. :) gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2018 10:42:00 PM

You're welcome and thank you. Glad you have a happy ending.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/6/2018 2:03:00 PM

Nicely penned ninette, M.L. You are right; sometimes it is good to stick together. We have all heard the term "safety in numbers," for a good reason.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/6/2018 2:10:00 PM

Wolves are confident creatures but, even they fall prey sometimes; they're not quite as tough as Hyenas. Thanks for stopping by.