You Must Go On

You must go on!

Our present is dark and  full of sorrow
And fog is blocking our view of tomorrow
But your fate and mine are intertwined
Thus, you must go on, don't look behind.

With your hand in mine, we will reach the moon
And defeat the storms and the heat of June!
Our sinister ambience we shall allude.
And paint the world with a joyful mood.

The caliber of darkness is hard to defeat
Yet, if you stay with me, we will be complete
Our unison discharges a piercing light;
obscurity shall dissolve and we will be alright!

The dispiriting whispers are like asphyxiating weeds
That smother your courage and uproot its seeds
The tumbling fortress of your soul,
Will be restored if you pursue your goal.

Yesterday, when the ships of the world
betrayed us and overboard we got hurled
Remember, how you and I, boarded our dreams
as  vessels until we reached those translucent streams.


The promising portrait of the coming dawn
Across our horizons will soon be drawn
Just one more step, don't look away
Witness the birth of a new day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/13/2011 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Shams in the contest "Why We Must Go On" sponsored by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Shams in the contest "Why We Must Go On" sponsored by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:56:00 PM
Congrats shams on your big win in Matt's contest with this great entry ..enjoy luv..
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:03:00 AM
Congrats on your 5th place finish in my contest!
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