You Move Me

yearnings
occur
unbidden

manifesting
obsessive
vivacious
electricities

measurably
emotional
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mumo Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Deceptively pithy write; dexterously packed with salient emotion expressed in sublime literary tropes...well-chosen words!
Godwin Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Love your comments, your vocabulary is as creative and intoxicating as any poem so I really appreciated each word! Again, many thanks ... CayCay (nice to meet you)
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 8:13 PM
caycay, I finally caught up here but am wondering. Did I miss any poem of yours you considered especially special? Please let me know, sweetie. Time to get to my trampoline!
Smith Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 12:29 AM
i liked this and it made me think about the "give & take" in any relationship.
Sergi Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Hi Cay Cay: A beautiful Acrostic!
Horsman Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 1:56 AM
Your poetry sure moves me, one amazing write,
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:45 PM
oh this is GREAT, Caycay . I hope it placed high. I see the congrats on it. Way to go, sweetie!!
Chiri Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 11:48 AM
This moved me;) congrats on your win!;)
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 11:29 AM
- Congratulations on your contribution in the contest ... great done Acrostics, CayCay :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 11:00 AM
Yes, those yearnings. Electricity discovered and re-discovered!... Congrats on your win in the contest, CayCay! :) gw
Green Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:56 AM
Really nicely done my friend. Congrats on your place in the contest
May Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement my friend CayCay this was over the top so well done!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:43 AM
Oh yes! Fabulously done. My best to you in the contest! xomo
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:11 AM
Precious words to deliver a precious message--excellent write, CayCay.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 1:08 AM
This is a wonderful entry and I hope you're a winner. Bless you everyday with more beautiful words. Love and prayers always, Gina
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 11:31 PM
Happy Birthday my dear friend. This acrostic is perfect for the contest. Blessings, Connie xxoo
Mcgee Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Love this CayCay. GL.
Romios Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 10:29 PM
Love this and Besf, CayCay Panagitota xxx
Y. Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Hi CayCay, If anyone could meet this challenge, I knew you could. You nailed it! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a good evening:-) Alexis
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