Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Cinquain

You, Me, and the Whole World

Wake up
Open your eyes
Tomorrow has arrived
And the sun has risen again
On you
On me
On the whole world
What you think when you wake
Could set the tone for the whole day
On you
On me
On the whole world
A word of love uttered
Affects the outcome of the day
On you
On me
On the whole world
A word that hurts alters
The future, beginning today
On you
On me
On the whole world
Before the end of day
Make peace to rest, improve the fate
On you
On me
On the whole world
Today bury your pain
Let your love fly and know that I
Love you.
 

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 07.30.10

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Wilma Neels August 3, 2010 at 5:46 AM Awesome approach to love Caroline, thank you for all your comments as well, love Wilma

David Byrne August 1, 2010 at 8:01 PM Like the duality of this Caroline!

Dr.Ram Mehta July 31, 2010 at 5:37 AM Nice refreshing thoughts on love, Caroline

Gert W. Knop July 31, 2010 at 4:17 AM Very nicely written, Caroline! Hat mir gut gefallen!! And thank you for your comment on Thaddaeus Haenke! He must have been a very interesting person!...Alles Gurte!...Gert