You Loose When You Win

You loose when you win
and it might not seem fair
and most of the time
the pain's hard to bare
but at the deepest of holes
there's always a way out
Because only when your there
do you know what lifes about

Life is an obstical
there's gonna be hills
and only at your weakest moment 
will you prevail
you find your streangth
you find your will
pick your head up
and climb that damn hill

Life can't always be fair
you have to feel pain
sit in the shadows
wonder what's yet to gain
Swallow your pride
stand on your feet
Take a step forword 
feel your heart beat

your still alive
let your soul guide you
remember the people
that will forever be beside you
trust in your friends
let them know you hurt
only then will you have the power
to let your feelings and mind convert.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 3, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Flora this is marvellous ,great message and well written. Anne
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May 3, 2011 at 4:17 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Flora. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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