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You Lit My Fire

YOU LIT MY FIRE I fell in love the first time I saw your smile Swept away by your elegant style. My pulse raced ever higher, Fuelled by my desire. My heart on Fire My eyes shone. But I can’t aspire To be the one you’d admire. Still, a man can dream once-in-a-while. I fell in love the first time I saw your smile. 25th October 2018

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Bryn Strudwick

Date: 11/28/2018 12:49:00 PM

Many thanks to everyone for your kind comments on my "Andaree" poem Bryn

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/28/2018 2:31:00 AM

Huge congratulations on your superb win in Emile's "Andaree" contest, Bryn - nicely done, and happy holidays to you and yours, my friend! :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2018 3:44:00 AM

Congrats on your win Bryn:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 11/24/2018 2:59:00 PM

Bryn, congratulation in your win

John Gondolf

Date: 11/24/2018 2:13:00 PM

Beautifully written, Bryn, congrats on your trophy win.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 11/24/2018 1:10:00 PM

Gorgeous! Congratulations on your 1st place win! well done!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/24/2018 12:40:00 PM

I loved your entry Bryn! I fell in love with my husband at first sight and we have been married almost 38 years in Dec. So I know it can happen. Congratulations on your magnificent Trophy win! : )

Bryn Strudwick
Date: 11/25/2018 3:36:00 AM