Bryn Strudwick Poet Rhyme

You Lit My Fire

YOU LIT MY FIRE

I fell in love the first time I saw your smile
Swept away by your elegant style.
My pulse raced ever higher,
Fuelled by my desire.
My heart on
Fire
My eyes shone.
But I can’t aspire
To be the one you’d admire.
Still, a man can dream once-in-a-while.
I fell in love the first time I saw your smile.

25th October 2018

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Bryn Strudwick November 28, 2018 at 12:49 PM Many thanks to everyone for your kind comments on my "Andaree" poem Bryn

Gregory Richard Barden November 28, 2018 at 2:31 AM Huge congratulations on your superb win in Emile's "Andaree" contest, Bryn - nicely done, and happy holidays to you and yours, my friend! :-)

Jan Allison November 25, 2018 at 3:44 AM Congrats on your win Bryn:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper November 24, 2018 at 2:59 PM Bryn, congratulation in your win

John Gondolf November 24, 2018 at 2:13 PM Beautifully written, Bryn, congrats on your trophy win.

P.S. Awtry November 24, 2018 at 1:10 PM Gorgeous! Congratulations on your 1st place win! well done!

Connie Marcum Wong November 24, 2018 at 12:40 PM I loved your entry Bryn! I fell in love with my husband at first sight and we have been married almost 38 years in Dec. So I know it can happen. Congratulations on your magnificent Trophy win! : ) Bryn Strudwick November 25, 2018 at 3:36 AM Thank you Connie. My story was fiction; yours is real. So much more romantic!

Emile Pinet November 24, 2018 at 12:30 PM Bryn, please contact me through Soupmail with your address for your prize my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier November 24, 2018 at 12:19 PM Back with congrats on your top win, Bryn.

Emile Pinet November 24, 2018 at 12:18 PM Congratulations Bryn! Your poem has placed "First" in my PoetrySoup contest. Very well done my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier October 25, 2018 at 4:42 PM Lovely, Bryn. Well penned.