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Breathless Poem Contest

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You Left Me Breathless
your beauty overwhelmed me your life was so carefree I loved you more than you did know perhaps I told you more than show when you said goodbye tears fell from the sky with you I was so blessed without you I am so breathless

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Date: 5/29/2025 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "You Left Me Breathless" write. Love the ending... Have a blessed day with your win.......
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/29/2025 10:35:00 AM
Thanks much Paula. I appreciate your comment
Date: 5/27/2025 4:25:00 AM
- Congratulations :) - hugs
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 5/27/2025 4:26:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a good week.

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