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Breathless Poem Contest

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You Left Me Breathless

You Left Me Breathless
your beauty overwhelmed me your life was so carefree I loved you more than you did know perhaps I told you more than show when you said goodbye tears fell from the sky with you I was so blessed without you I am so breathless
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "You Left Me Breathless" write. Love the ending... Have a blessed day with your win.......
Mckeithan Avatar
May 29, 2025 at 10:35 AM
Thanks much Paula. I appreciate your comment
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 4:25 AM
- Congratulations :) - hugs
Mckeithan Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 4:26 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a good week.
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