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You left

You left
and the damn sun
kept shining

You left
and it was
horrible timing

You left
with ice
in your veins

You left
and I went 
completely insane

You left
and the days
kept on coming

You left
and I felt
like a dummy

You left
because you stopped
loving me

You left 
because you 
wanted to be free

You left
and the rain
still came

You left 
and the clouds
rolled away

You left
and I didn't
know what to do

You left
there was no
rhyme or reason
no realization
no break through
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Seeker Avatar
September 29, 2024 at 10:53 AM
Painful and yet each morn ushers a new dawn, we must shrug off the past and move on
Harty Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 12:46 PM
I'm working on moving on more now than ever! Thanks for commenting! :)
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