You Hv Been Missed

Trying to Yield, the Struggle,
I just want you Bee,
The heart is lonely as it's right now,
Am crazy, crazy, trying to be a good man,
Lord is my witness, right now,
My lonely heart knows how much u want me,
My head knows how you feel,
I take this stint to stamp that, yoh will always be by side,
In my mind u you own boundless ocean,
Also in my heart, u own the immortal stars,
Now, as soon I lash on to my feet,
I promise to save the last dance for u,
You're my beautiful painting,
You're my comfortable coin.
You hv been Missed,
My fruitful Egypt.

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My 2017 Love Story

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May 24, 2017 at 9:47 AM
Hi Bryan, You penned such a lovely write. May I have have the last dance? In all serious , you expressed you thoughts very well. It was just what I was looking for. Thanks for participating in my "Your Favorite Song " contest. Congratulations on your fine win;-) Alexis
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May 24, 2017 at 10:05 AM
Alexis.. I'm glad you give my poem a winning slot.... I'm so thrilled... Feels good to be up there... Have a blessed nightfall and thanks for reviewing my poem.. Lots of love..
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May 23, 2017 at 4:56 PM
Well it can't be Save The Last Dance For Me but I like it. Well done.
Oule Avatar
May 24, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Thanks Jean, Surely the last dance can be given to you... Thank you for appreciating my works.
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