Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

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You Hold the Other Half of My Heart

You hold
                      the other half
                               of my heart.

         It's yours eternally, my dearest,
                        even if you decide one day
                                    to desert me.

         Keep it if or when you bid your final...
                    farewell; never give it back to me
                            under any circumstances!

        You'd think you'd make me 
                    whole again if you do, but I'd feel....
                            so incomplete.

                 

Date written: 09/27/2019

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Geoffrey Brewer February 2, 2020 at 10:41 AM An intelligent, expressive, effective metaphor, that delights in a sad, poignant way. This poem is worthy of higher placing. Edward Ibeh February 2, 2020 at 6:22 PM Thank you so much, Geoffrey:-) Glad you liked my poem!