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You Hold the Other Half of My Heart

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You hold the other half of my heart. It's yours eternally, my dearest, even if you decide one day to desert me. Keep it if or when you bid your final... farewell; never give it back to me under any circumstances! You'd think you'd make me whole again if you do, but I'd feel.... so incomplete. Date written: 09/27/2019

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Date: 2/2/2020 10:41:00 AM
An intelligent, expressive, effective metaphor, that delights in a sad, poignant way. This poem is worthy of higher placing.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/2/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Geoffrey:-) Glad you liked my poem!

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