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You Have Lost

You cant take this from me
                    These feelings that i have
                    You are trying to deceive me
                    You can have my memory
                    I will be remembered
                    You have lost.
                    


                                        by kate mcnaughton.

Copyright © Kate Mcnaughton | Year Posted 2009

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John Freeman Date: 10/1/2009 9:48:00 AM Feelings, one of the few things that still belong to the individual, love's way of preserving one's own soul, of this be assured. God's gift to humanity is stable. Sincerely, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/29/2009 1:42:00 PM No one should be able to take away good feelings, Kate. If someone is trying to deceive you, they are the ones who should be forgotten. You "will be remembered" for your feelings and your kind heart. It's nice to meet another Scottish poet here. James Fraser of Edenboro is one of the Soup's best! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Danny Nunn Date: 9/28/2009 8:46:00 PM Great write, I like the way that you write, plain and simple, but to the point? Thank you for reviewing all of my poems today, that was nice of you. The one "Angel Trail", I wrote for my Dad when he was killed in a car accident...even though the poem is not that way..His last words were, "Don't worry about me, the angels are here to take me home". Keep writing, you are doing mighty fine...thanks Danny Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/28/2009 3:21:00 PM Interesting form. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 9/28/2009 2:55:00 PM Hi Kate I really enjoyed this one! It's true we never forget.....Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Later Love Light Truth Patricia Login to Reply