Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

You Got Me Wired

I browse through all but it is with you I fall
Unplanned spot and plot, I dared took the shot
You lit my fire, you got me wired

You're so smart you got me from fresh start
Your creative art painted joy in my heart
You lit my fire, you got me wired

Your heartwarming style sweetened my bile
Like the lily in the Nile, easily you free my smile
You lit my fire, you got me wired

Beyond beauty are your thoughts
All of them got me caught
I tried to blot even fought
Still, you lit my fire, you got me wired

Thank God it's you I befall
Into good hands I thrall
No committed foul
Since you touched my soul
You lit my fire, you got me wired

(C) olive eloisa
8:11 pm
May 10, 2014

Contest Name:	a poem you have not entered in a poetry soup contest #1 
Sponsor:	Poet Destroyer A 
9th Place

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Poet Destroyer A June 10, 2014 at 4:08 PM it's not my fault you are on everyone's winning list... Hugs, Linda

Dr.Ram Mehta May 17, 2014 at 5:24 AM Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:53 PM Thank you for your awesome COmment sir,. :)

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2014 at 10:17 PM cool title for this one. Reminded me of the end of the movie Grease, where John travolta sings to Olivia Newton John: Electrifying!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:53 PM Thank you for that electrifying comment,, :D

Paul Callus May 16, 2014 at 9:04 AM Congratulations Olive_eloi:) cu later

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 16, 2014 at 2:24 AM Lovely write Olive ! Enjoyed the read ,, congrats on wonderful win ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:52 PM thank you.. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 16, 2014 at 12:16 AM OLIVE, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 2:49 PM Thanks Linda.. :)

Eric Schojan May 13, 2014 at 4:39 PM love the style and flow, the rhyming scheme, it's all very unique and i love the story it tells as well, thanks for sharing!! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 14, 2014 at 2:21 AM thank you very much for taking the time to come and read :) GBU

David Williams May 12, 2014 at 8:59 AM Olive I like this a lot...David Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 12, 2014 at 3:52 PM thanks DAvid.. :D

Arthur Vaso May 10, 2014 at 10:54 PM I am glad I do all of this!!!! LOL Seriously, a very lovely poem, you just keep getting better and better!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 1:54 AM Thanks much for the comments..:) well appreciated..:)

Casarah Nance May 10, 2014 at 9:18 PM Woot Woot. I think you are awesome when you are wired, you have such a fun spirit, I love it. Keep smiling chicky. :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 8:50 AM Thanks Cadarah..:) GBU...hugs:)

Cherl Dunn May 10, 2014 at 7:02 PM Wow is the first thing I want to say, you've blow me out of the part and down the road girl lol man I can tell your wired, putting this on paper pen to ink you've made great choses is what I think thanks for sharing your high tone approach to poetry with me tonight, you've got me inspired maybe even wired, lol just kidding take care cheri lol Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 8:50 AM Thanks Cherl..:) yours as well a beauty.. Gbu

Anne-Lise Andresen May 10, 2014 at 4:28 PM - A really beautiful poem Olive - it captured my heart - I wish you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 8:53 AM Thanks much Anne Lise..:) hugs..:)

Paul Callus May 10, 2014 at 2:50 PM Hi Olive_eloi.....this is great! Flows from the heart, sincere and touching. The same thing happens to me, so I can relate. [This goes in my favs.] God bless you...// paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 8:46 AM Thanks much Paul..:) GBU will cu latent...:)

David Williams May 10, 2014 at 2:47 PM Olive I like this and the refrain is excellent, it would also do very well in couplet form....David Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 8:47 AM Thanks so much David..:) appreciate your comments

Jake Ponce May 10, 2014 at 12:56 PM Olive, as always you've conjured another bright poem that really makes me envious. LOL My world lacks sunshine and I look to others' worlds for warmth. I run to your poems to uplift my spirit. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 11, 2014 at 8:52 AM Thanks Jake.. I too am uplifted when I read yours..:) gbu