Get Your Premium Membership

You Got Me

You got me in rifting feel twists of bits not yet on my heart’s list. You got me with your careless ways that my ways had not come across. Yes, you laid our mess in pain’s toss. Now I know my body swelled grips wanting your sexy, sculptured lips; your maleness was my need display, your long, dark hair, my dared fondle, your brown eyes, my eyes' prized coddle - and, your dance hips had swindled my sway. You got me in rifting feel twists that sent me thru heart mirrored mists. We dragged love mute thru wasted days until stays were just trace loss and no feeling words held hope-gloss. Yes, you got me stuck where lost lays. Now, I need remedies best tips to strengthen my spirit’s raw strips. Yes, I am lost in numbing rays where my hope tilts on my wobble. My honest thoughts steer full topple and tend my breaks with faith’s own stays. You got me with false act insists and kissed me blind in dizzy frays that my love-laced dreams failed to resist. ... CayCay Jennings May 27, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/11/2018 7:15:00 PM
That was beauty written
Login to Reply
Date: 6/1/2018 1:08:00 AM
I LOVE it CayCay! You have shared the amour that can not be resisted! A wonderful entry for this contest. I hope to see it on the winner's list! xxoo
Login to Reply
Date: 5/30/2018 8:27:00 AM
Sometimes infatuation can lead us down dark alleys. Nicely written, CayCay, best of luck. John
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2018 5:55:00 PM
A wonderfully feisty account of a relationship you "failed to resist." Awesome work, Cay Cay!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2018 8:02:00 AM
I am so impressed, you created a masterpiece. I love the result.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/27/2018 12:57:00 PM
WoW! CayCay, Great entry for contest. I haven't got a clue what and how to write for this contest. But you did well with this passionate and sultry write. Sometimes the objective of our affection is not good for us but it's darn hard to resist them. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Jennings Avatar
Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/29/2018 12:38:00 AM
Hey Sweetie -so u escaped watching the royal wedding? Love your contest theme. My little girl is very active and currently in deliberation's with my muse. This poem is very much based on Kyle's Father as pertains to our relationships story. Love the WOW you gifted me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 5/27/2018 9:29:00 AM
This seemed a bit of a challenge to me Cay Cay but you've done a great job on it.Well done and good luck. Tom.
Login to Reply
Jennings Avatar
Caycay Jennings
Date: 5/27/2018 10:23:00 AM
Tom, you are very, very good to me and I always appreciate the sincerity and depth of your responses. Thanks for being in my world (where I do NOT read others enough - time, darn it, defies my intentions.) Again, many thanks and all the best to you ... CayCay

Book: Shattered Sighs