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You Give Me Something

you give me something to believe in something to love something to adore you say you won't break me down but you lied you return and I am broken down into a million pieces crying in my corner you return and build me up again and the cycle begins over and over

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/11/2009 3:52:00 PM
Nice work Kaleigh and welcome to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy your stay. Happy Easter...Raul
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Date: 4/11/2009 11:40:00 AM
we are attracted like ... so true! nice write! Jim
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Date: 4/10/2009 9:40:00 PM
Painful cycles like you have described so well in your poem are very difficult to break. ..either together or alone.
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