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You Gave Me Wings

You gave me wings. But I refuse to fly; Around you my heart sings. Wholeheartedly you detached the strings; Although you knew your eyes won't stay dry; You gave me wings. Wishing me to live in eternal springs; You smiled at me hiding your sigh; Around you my heart sings. Knowing that the life is a ride in swings; Which runs between low and high; You gave me wings. I hear the bells of freedom that rings; Yet my soul refuses to say bye-bye; Around you my heart sings. Love is not about having luxurious things; But letting your lover shines freely as blue sky; You gave me wings; Around you my heart sings. Contest: First person Villanelle Poetry contest Date : 27 August 2022 Rhyming scheme checked with https://www.rhymezone.com/ Sponsor: L Milton Hankins

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Date: 3/29/2025 6:29:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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