You Don'T See Me

You don't see me,
Like I see you, 
You can't feel for me,
Like I do for you.
You've got the hair,
The eyes, 
The beautiful smile,
The laugh,
The voice,
But your in denial,
I got some Witt,
Little charm,
None of the looks,
I'll bring you harm,
But if you looked at me,
Like I look at you,
I'd hold you above everything,
Everything that I do,
I'll make you laugh when you are weak, 
Cry when you are strong,
I will try to do right, 
Although I may be wrong,
I can't promise happiness, 
But promise this I can,
For just one little chance,
I'll be the perfect man,
Open doors when it Is needed, 
Guide you in or out, 
Hold you when your upset, 
Or simply just in doubt,
I'll keep the smile you show greatly,
Framed upon my shelf,
I'd love you oh so deeply,
Yet be my conplete self,
I know I'm not a perfect person,
There's a lot better out there for you,
But I can promise you this,
I'd be everything for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/11/2010 1:08:00 PM
such a sweet and loving write, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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Date: 9/11/2010 12:30:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. soup offers many contests on site.. check them out to enter and good luck..with luv..
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Date: 9/11/2010 9:20:00 AM
A very beautiful write. I can feel the emotion within your words. It sends a message and allows you to feel and imagine what is going on. Continue the good job.
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