you didn't let me finish
.
whilst your head
back
it's tilt'd
whilst your breathe
rush'd
out
whilst your frenetic
hip's
limb'z
roam'd
i
me
mine
my
merely
wuz admiring your
sweet
sound
Copyright © James Peranteau | Year Posted 2024
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