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You Deserve The Best

If I were to paint our Friendship, The canvas would change every day. On Monday the colors are subtle And Friday would blow you away! The paint brush is much more expressive With freedom beyond what we say, The colors are pure, and oh so expensive… VanGogh (and his ear) couldn’t pay! So… I painted with words A poem for you, My sister, my friend in LA A canvas that’s true From my heart, through and through, To express what I wanted to say. Three Years!! Holy sh!! That’s AWESOME of you To keep coming back every day!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 4/20/2009 12:49:00 AM
Nice portrayal of friendship, I enjoyed its entirety...Raul
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Date: 11/30/2008 1:30:00 PM
Congratulation, this poem written for you sister, truly deserves to be a feature this week. Well done! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/29/2008 10:17:00 PM
Karen - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/24/2008 9:02:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your sister. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/24/2008 5:48:00 PM
"You Deserve The Beat" is a featured poem. Congratulations Karen. So Do You. Vince
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Date: 11/24/2008 1:51:00 PM
Nice tribute to your sister. What an up lifting poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/24/2008 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations Karen on this beautiful poem being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:04:00 AM
Karen, how proper that your well deserved write be picked again this years as the Holidays once again approach. Congratulations my friend. Happy Holidays. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2008 3:05:00 PM
Brilliant, theres no better treasure like a poem in painting and no greater pleasure when its painted with words, bravo. Blessed be. Bellantony
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