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You Deal

When you get dealt a hand at life, you have two chances to trade a few cards in for another try. When you get dealt a junk hand you have the choice to fold, to give up, but what can you do except deal. Crazy things they happen and you shouldn't get scared if it doesn't play out the way you want it to. You deal, you do what you can and when it seems life cannot get any worse and you can't do anymore you just deal. It is the world and it is life it may suck at times but, what can you do besides just deal.

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Date: 11/5/2010 7:47:00 AM
So true Amanda none of us knows what life's planned.We just have to get on with it.But not alone.I don't know your pain.But I do know what it feels like to suffer From one fellow human being to another I offer you my love and care.Which I wouldn't be able to do without support from without and within.Love and laughter sustain me.I love reading your poetry it touches me.I think you write beautifully.This is one of the good hands you were dealt.That is a joy for you and for others. Love June
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Date: 11/3/2010 7:57:00 AM
Yep good write... and advice. Deal on soupster. ;)
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Date: 11/3/2010 6:39:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amanda. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/3/2010 4:54:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its creative theme.. hope u enjoy your time on the Soup and will check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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