You Can'T Take It With You

Take a trip with me
Out to the bloody sea
View sin and misery
Then dive right in and take a swim
Inside the den of iniquity
Experience your fears
And shed a couple tears
Get tortured by your peers
Play show and tell with the wishing well
While you burn in hell for a thousand years

When you set a goal
You will pay a toll
And fall into a hole
You scream and shout, but you can’t get out
And you start to doubt your immortal soul
The thoughts inside your brain
They cause internal pain
They leave a mental stain
The darkening skies and your blood-shot eyes
Make you realize that you’ve gone insane

Whether you are good or bad it doesn’t matter at all
You’ve just got to realize you’re headed for a fall
For all your greed and selfishness you’re in for a surprise
Enjoy it while you’re here---because you can’t take it with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 27, 2009 at 1:05 PM
Sad way to live. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 11:11 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more Moose. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations Moose on your lyric being featured. Vince
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June 23, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry. Keep on posting. Ernilando
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June 22, 2009 at 1:58 PM
I agree with all of the other comments. Keep up the good work. God bless You!
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June 22, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Moose - Very deep poem full of introspection and truth -I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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June 22, 2009 at 2:17 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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