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You Can'T Do Anything Right

"You can't do anything right" This is the message people showed toward me when I was growing up "Why bother if you can't do it?" "Don't dance with us if you don't know how to" So I'm the one who sits by herself because "I can't do anything right" "Don't touch that if you don't know what you are doing" "Why talk if no one will listen to you?" So I'm the one who doesn't bother trying because "I don't have a voice" Still to this day I could be in a crowd, let alone with friends, and no one would hear me So I'm the girl, the woman, the wife, the mother, the HUMAN being that "can't do anything right & has no voice" But that's OK I'm still here I did something right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/21/2016 1:03:00 PM
Hope this is fiction? I've written poems on the same subject but for humor's sake. Yet there are many out there who suffer from this kind of mental abuse. How sad. Enjoyed reading your work. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Carrie White
Date: 5/27/2016 6:21:00 PM
I wrote this because it happened. I write poetry about my experiences or how I feel. And thank you much.

Book: Shattered Sighs