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You Can Run But Can'T Hide

Another day and I've sinned again.
Can't I go a day without SIN?
I should lock myself inside
a room all day. But wait;
I can still sin with
lust, anger, hate
and worries
on my
MIND.

Pace, G
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04-26-2012

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Just That Archaic Poet Date: 8/21/2013 2:28:00 PM lol Indeed, one does not need to leave the house in order to sin and sin again. Thank you for enticing me to review different styles of poetry. I am partial to rhyming, but this is cool, too. Thanks again for an interesting read! :) Login to Reply

Lillie Williams Date: 12/5/2012 1:06:00 PM Awesome job here Pace. No matter where we are, we can always sin. It is not always what we do but what we think as well. I love this little saying. Do you think that I can use this at my church? Every third Sunday in the month is young people day. So I think that this will be an awesome read. Thanks for sharing. Login to Reply

Doreen Wright Date: 7/30/2012 3:22:00 PM Sin is inevitable but your poem is so visual. I love it Ink! Try to keep the sinning to a minimal tho, lol! Xoxoxo Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/30/2012 1:38:00 PM Hi, glad I found one I had not read....and it is so very true....well written Pace,G - Have a lovely week. - oxox love Anne-Lise / Take care. :) Login to Reply

Janet Vick Date: 6/2/2012 12:03:00 PM Humans as a whole are gonna sin, so don't beat yourself up just do better next time. He is a loving God and knows forgiveness. Take care. Janet Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 12:13:00 PM Thank you for sharing with me Janet!!! Hugs

Carma Sanderson Date: 6/1/2012 11:51:00 PM So00 very true! i doing it right now! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 6/2/2012 12:28:00 AM Lol..too funny Carma!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 5/15/2012 6:10:00 AM Oh how true this is xx Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/15/2012 9:02:00 AM Yes indeed!!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Date: 5/4/2012 12:40:00 AM This is utterly truthful and amazing bro..... Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/4/2012 4:01:00 AM Oh yes sir it is...glad to have you stop by.

Black Eyed Susan Date: 5/1/2012 7:46:00 AM So true. Hope you are not too hard on yourself! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 5/1/2012 7:59:00 AM LOL..I'm not..just reality thats all.

Laura Breidenthal Date: 4/30/2012 1:14:00 PM Very interesting view. Liked the honesty of this particular verse. Very well expressed. Always, Laura Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/30/2012 2:25:00 PM Thank you for stopping by and sharing with me.

Diana Mohammed Date: 4/27/2012 9:20:00 AM I loved this honest write Pace... It's funny how we cannot grow nor move from one level to another without this sort of self analysis... I stand in salute my friend... Thank you for this reminder...Love Diana Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/30/2012 9:40:00 AM Thank you so much..I'm glad that you shared your thoughts with me.

Dan Kearley Date: 4/26/2012 7:06:00 PM Sounds like thoughts on my mind? ~Sin~ I keep trying to live my life without it... Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 7:13:00 PM I'm sure all of us who are guilty of sin go through this. Thats why I wrote it. smiles.

Nancy Jones Date: 4/26/2012 5:36:00 PM Yepperooni.... gonna check out some more of your nonettes. Nice to meet you, namaste~N Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 6:11:00 PM Ok...Please help yourself luv.. Thanks for stopping by and sharing.

Michael J. Falotico Date: 4/26/2012 4:59:00 PM Very good piece. Enjoyed your open soul today. Michael Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 5:01:00 PM Thank you Falotico!! Thank you so much for stopping by. Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 5:00:00 PM Thanks Scribe!! Just a message I feel like others have felt once before.

Deborah Burch Date: 4/26/2012 4:03:00 PM LOL!! So very true! hang in there lawman, you have a lawyer--The Lawyer-- ;) but you might wanna make a choice at some point--ya think? Big hugs,much love deb and I like the way you are formatting these Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 4/26/2012 4:55:00 PM lol..thank you maam!!! hugs..smiling.