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You Can Run But Can'T Hide

Another day and I've sinned again.
Can't I go a day without SIN?
I should lock myself inside
a room all day. But wait;
I can still sin with
lust, anger, hate
and worries
on my
MIND.

Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

04-26-2012

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Just That Archaic Poet

August 21, 2013 at 2:28 PM

lol Indeed, one does not need to leave the house in order to sin and sin again. Thank you for enticing me to review different styles of poetry. I am partial to rhyming, but this is cool, too. Thanks again for an interesting read! :)

Lillie Williams

December 5, 2012 at 1:06 PM

Awesome job here Pace. No matter where we are, we can always sin. It is not always what we do but what we think as well. I love this little saying. Do you think that I can use this at my church? Every third Sunday in the month is young people day. So I think that this will be an awesome read. Thanks for sharing.

Doreen Wright

July 30, 2012 at 3:22 PM

Sin is inevitable but your poem is so visual. I love it Ink! Try to keep the sinning to a minimal tho, lol! Xoxoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 30, 2012 at 1:38 PM

Hi, glad I found one I had not read....and it is so very true....well written Pace,G - Have a lovely week. - oxox love Anne-Lise / Take care. :)

Janet Vick

June 2, 2012 at 12:03 PM

Humans as a whole are gonna sin, so don't beat yourself up just do better next time. He is a loving God and knows forgiveness. Take care. Janet

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 2, 2012 at 12:13 PM

Thank you for sharing with me Janet!!! Hugs

Carma Sanderson

June 1, 2012 at 11:51 PM

So00 very true! i doing it right now!

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 2, 2012 at 12:28 AM

Lol..too funny Carma!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

May 15, 2012 at 6:10 AM

Oh how true this is xx

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 15, 2012 at 9:02 AM

Yes indeed!!

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

May 4, 2012 at 12:40 AM

This is utterly truthful and amazing bro.....

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 4, 2012 at 4:01 AM

Oh yes sir it is...glad to have you stop by.

Black Eyed Susan

May 1, 2012 at 7:46 AM

So true. Hope you are not too hard on yourself!

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 1, 2012 at 7:59 AM

LOL..I'm not..just reality thats all.

Laura Breidenthal

April 30, 2012 at 1:14 PM

Very interesting view. Liked the honesty of this particular verse. Very well expressed. Always, Laura

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 30, 2012 at 2:25 PM

Thank you for stopping by and sharing with me.

Diana Mohammed

April 27, 2012 at 9:20 AM

I loved this honest write Pace... It's funny how we cannot grow nor move from one level to another without this sort of self analysis... I stand in salute my friend... Thank you for this reminder...Love Diana

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 30, 2012 at 9:40 AM

Thank you so much..I'm glad that you shared your thoughts with me.

Dan Kearley

April 26, 2012 at 7:06 PM

Sounds like thoughts on my mind? ~Sin~ I keep trying to live my life without it...

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 26, 2012 at 7:13 PM

I'm sure all of us who are guilty of sin go through this. Thats why I wrote it. smiles.

Nancy Jones

April 26, 2012 at 5:36 PM

Yepperooni.... gonna check out some more of your nonettes. Nice to meet you, namaste~N

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 26, 2012 at 6:11 PM

Ok...Please help yourself luv.. Thanks for stopping by and sharing.

Michael J. Falotico

April 26, 2012 at 4:59 PM

Very good piece. Enjoyed your open soul today. Michael

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 26, 2012 at 5:01 PM

Thank you Falotico!! Thank you so much for stopping by.

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 26, 2012 at 5:00 PM

Thanks Scribe!! Just a message I feel like others have felt once before.

Deborah Burch

April 26, 2012 at 4:03 PM

LOL!! So very true! hang in there lawman, you have a lawyer--The Lawyer-- ;) but you might wanna make a choice at some point--ya think? Big hugs,much love deb and I like the way you are formatting these

Pace Ink-U-Script

April 26, 2012 at 4:55 PM

lol..thank you maam!!! hugs..smiling.

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