Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

- You Can Not See Her Thoughts -

Her beam on the waves in fear
And wash the dusk with silver tear

And tugged it from her deep emotions
What matter to her is their colored motions

A broken world`s  blood hits the ground
Water splash and river dashing down

Will peace restored again 
The truth of life ~ Amen






28.09.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Hansteven Selfa December 25, 2015 at 1:49 AM Love this poem so much!!! :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 25, 2015 at 6:40 AM - Hansteven, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock November 8, 2015 at 9:47 PM A sad poem my friend. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2015 at 12:34 PM - Yes- sad Phyllis, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Punnia Viswan Bhatia October 27, 2015 at 11:58 AM well written and expressed Anne. 7 ~love, peace and happiness to you ~ Anne-Lise Andresen October 28, 2015 at 5:05 AM - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, R. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Godwin October 16, 2015 at 11:58 PM Another short, clever and well-written sentiment. Very Good, Anne Lise ... CayCay Anne-Lise Andresen October 17, 2015 at 10:46 AM - CayCay, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neil Kruger October 6, 2015 at 12:17 PM Absolutely moving. Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2015 at 12:38 PM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Neil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort October 5, 2015 at 9:06 AM It seems that what is happening can affect the way we see the world. It can change so quickly. We all wish for peace and harmony in this life, and may it please be with us. Sometimes, our wishes seem so far away. Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2015 at 11:33 AM - Terrible wars, human beings killed, wounded ..... young children growing up in a living hell .... hard to see the future in peace, Duke - Thank you for your words - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn October 2, 2015 at 4:29 PM Dear Anne Lise What an interesting poem here Anne Lise, Not your usual at all but it is really good, It has an extra layer to it a mystical charm one might say, love the ending it pulls it altogether in the end, enjoyed, and thanks for the review of my creepy little dude, it was alot of fun to write this for my little Benny at work he loved it to the max, cheri Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2015 at 5:58 AM - Cherl, glad you liked this write :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight October 2, 2015 at 8:25 AM Such sadness and hope in your poem, Anne Lise. Very emotional and powerful thoughts that invite the reader to think about. Hugs, Sandra Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2015 at 5:54 AM - Sandra, thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid October 1, 2015 at 5:34 PM very beautifully painted visions dear pal Anne-Lise Andresen October 3, 2015 at 5:52 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley September 30, 2015 at 12:41 PM "A broken world`s blood hits the ground Water splash and river dashing down." Golden poem with some truly awesome lines. You nailed it with this excellent poem my friend. A7.. Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:39 PM - Glad you liked this write, Robert - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez September 30, 2015 at 5:03 AM That time will come, dear Anne. It is a promise written. This is tragic in its depth. Unusual lines that struck the chord. 7 and FAV. hugs! Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 5:07 AM - A great honor and pleasure, thank you my friend Kim - You made my day :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake September 30, 2015 at 1:11 AM Truly beautiful peice Anne, You have some really nice lines in this that capture her thoughts!!!! God Bless Kevin Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:10 AM - Glad you liked this write, Kevin - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2015 at 3:15 PM of blood and tears. Deep one here! Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:08 AM - Too much blood and tears ... - Andrea, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith September 29, 2015 at 2:49 PM Have Faith my friend. He will show us the way. Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:06 AM - I think it's up to us humans ...... we were not born with evils - Tim, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus September 29, 2015 at 1:46 PM Emotionally sad; and it's mostly our fault that it has come to this! But not all is lost...we have faith and hope! ~ Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:04 AM - Yes, people's evils .....but hope and faith is important :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri September 29, 2015 at 1:35 PM Hi Anne Lise, I enjoyed your poem this day. God bless Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:02 AM - Njeri, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath September 29, 2015 at 1:08 PM Silver tear is such a soft substance it always flows from deep emotions when heart is hit. sometimes it's very tough to regain my lovely lovely friend. I think wisdom may be helpful. Beautiful poem my lovely lovely friend of heart felt emotions. 7 is sure. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:01 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jaycee Cervenka September 29, 2015 at 1:04 PM And so shall it be! Mother Nature cares not for the actions of man, but looks on in sadness at the destruction. You did a wonderful job creating the tone. Jan Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 4:00 AM - Janet, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun September 29, 2015 at 11:30 AM I can feel the sadness and hope in your very beautiful poem my dear fried, Anne. I'm Hugging it and you. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for your lovely visit on my poem, wonderful comments and for thinking about my approaching special day. God bless you my loving friend. Wishing you a happy week ahead! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2015 at 3:59 AM - I'm ready for "that special day" :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, sweet friend Leonora :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 29, 2015 at 10:49 AM Enjoyed reading your work..If for a contest, reads like winning material..I can feel the emotion within the lines and the voice of the writer..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 11:10 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam September 29, 2015 at 8:52 AM Excellent. Very inspiring write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 11:10 AM - Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen September 29, 2015 at 1:38 AM What a brilliant writ here. I love how it was constructed, light and love..........A.M. Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 4:53 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor September 29, 2015 at 12:38 AM Nicely written Anne-Lise the ending lifted our spirits. Enjoyed reading. Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 4:53 AM - Michael, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May September 28, 2015 at 11:47 PM "And wash the dusk with silver tears"....beautiful write Anne...hugs Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 4:52 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jerry Heldman September 28, 2015 at 11:22 PM Very nice and inspiring!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 29, 2015 at 4:52 AM - Jerry, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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