You Bring Out the Best In Me

You bring out the best in me
So, just leave the rest to me

We'll sail on a cruise
Afterward's we'll say our I do's

Because baby, you bring out the best in me
So, just leave the rest to me

I'll make all our plans for a honeymoon
Moonscapes, quiet escapes, landscapes, to happen soon


We'll take our vows by the ocean
Big crashing waves down in motion

I'll wear black
and you wear hues of pink for slack

We'll have white doves fly
We'll offer our love to the sky

It'll be for forever
You're my friend and lover steady as a river

Rivers, seas, oceans, bays, ponds, lakes tell a story of our love
On our ocean cruise we'll share our love trove

To do or not
Let's go for it and tie the knot!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/16/2011 11:09:00 PM
Susan,, ;-) a big congratulations, on your awesome poem being featured this week,.. take care,..and enjoy your Saint Patricks Day.... ;-) ...p.d."
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Date: 3/15/2011 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Susan. Have a wonderful week and may you have baskets full of inspiration come your way. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 4:49:00 PM
Congrats Susan on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. wonderful words to share with us all my friend.. hope u have been well luv..
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Date: 12/9/2009 9:03:00 AM
Excellent write. Thank you for sharing and for your kind comments on my work. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 12/9/2009 8:05:00 AM
Beautiful poem endowed with your love and passions with wonderful description of Nature. Keep writing you have great potentials. Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 12/4/2009 1:15:00 PM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Susan. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/3/2009 6:35:00 PM
exciting positive romantic poem!-Robert
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Date: 12/3/2009 4:43:00 PM
gentle, loving poem! Susan! welcome to the soup! and thanks for your comments! jimbo
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Date: 12/3/2009 4:01:00 PM
Very soft and romantic write. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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