You Blew Your Cover

Ok you found the way
To my bleeding heart
Unlocked the door
Maybe love can start
Come inside 
Take a look around
I will not hide
From the pain you found




The tears I cried
When you went away
I kept them inside
For this special day
So take a piece
If you like
Can’t cry no more
I’m cold as ice




Can you light the fire
Once again
Turn up the heat
For an old friend
Turn this spark
Into a flame
Until its roaring
And burns the pain




I said I loved you
But that didn’t count
You walked away
Said you had some doubts
But let’s be truthful
You saw another
It was in your eyes
You blew your cover




© Copyright KC.Leake
26th April 2015
All Rights Reserved


Based On Fantasy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/11/2015 8:30:00 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
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Kevin Leake
Date: 5/14/2015 12:21:00 PM
Thanks Funom, Appreciate your commets as always Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 4/26/2015 5:20:00 PM
I like it when poems are based on fantasy. That way, I won't say something wrong, LIKE! It makes me sad, that this happen to you.... LOL, But I am not gonna say that. Instead, I'm gonna say.. Your poem rocks, and I am glad you are still around. I haven't seen you on my pages so i had no ideas. I found your poetic name on my favorite poet list. Kevin, I love the poem, painful to know this kind of doubts happens. I am like a ghost,, mysterious when it comes to love. But once love hits the fan. I walk away, not wanting to feel the pain. A frozen heart is better than one in pain. Love Linda
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Kevin Leake
Date: 4/27/2015 12:49:00 PM
Hi Linda, I appreciate your uplifting comments Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 4/26/2015 12:17:00 PM
Oh this feels so sad...Nothing hurt more than not saying the true reason of a goodbye..not even the goodbye itself.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 4/27/2015 12:48:00 PM
Sorry didn't mean to write a sad one!! Thank you for the comments Charma Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 4/26/2015 12:08:00 PM
Wonderful "fantasy" more nightmare...You can definitely tell through the eyes...nice one Tim
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Kevin Leake
Date: 4/27/2015 12:46:00 PM
Hey Tim, Thanks for popping by and for the comments Best Wishes Kevin
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