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"you Being Close"

Whenever you come close. Like the ocean comming in.. cools my soul like a summer dose..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2010 8:08:00 AM
Soothing, and loving! I love this! :) Nice job! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/8/2010 7:27:00 AM
enjoyed, I light up when my honey is close.
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Date: 4/8/2010 7:08:00 AM
Very comforting senryu, Michael. This is how I feel when I love someone. And "Rear Window" is my favorite Hitchcock film too! What an awesome performance by Jimmy Stewart. Love, Carolyn
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