"you Being Close"

Whenever you come close.
Like the ocean comming in..
cools my soul like a summer dose..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 8:08 AM
Soothing, and loving! I love this! :) Nice job! ~ Carrie
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April 8, 2010 at 7:27 AM
enjoyed, I light up when my honey is close.
Devonshire Avatar
April 8, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Very comforting senryu, Michael. This is how I feel when I love someone. And "Rear Window" is my favorite Hitchcock film too! What an awesome performance by Jimmy Stewart. Love, Carolyn
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