You Are the One

You are the one, that can reach, into my innermost thoughts, 
You are the one, that can teach me, 
the way to be the best of myself 
You are the one, that can touch my soul, 
to open up and learn to be whole 
You are the one, that can dry my tears, 
show me how to live without fears 
You are the one, that can lift my spirit, 
with all the love that can be fulfilled 
You are the one, that can light my fire, 
burning desire hidden deep in secret places 
You are the one, that can extinquish my agony 
of loneliness set in concrete within me 
You are the one that set me free, from all the angst of sad emotion 
You are the one, that can make me say.. 
please don't go away 
You are the one which, I longed to be with 
don't ever leave me to feel so empty. 
You are the one... that can be my destiny. 
Jieranai Maier
 © July 2004

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/5/2018 6:25:00 AM
Love this one, a very well written poem
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Date: 5/29/2017 2:30:00 PM
This poem has a hidden agenda. It is very well structured and calls upon the reader's perception of relationships. The poem determines what is right, what is important and what gives in situation to make companionship work. Each line is sanctioned by expectation and allows the eternal nature of love to reign. Love it!
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Jieranai Maier
Date: 5/29/2017 2:39:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert for your analysis, and your kind words of encouragement. I really appreciated it and it gave me inspiration to spend more time to write poems. Best Wishes, Jieranai
Date: 5/16/2017 3:05:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup with your first poem. I see the poem was written a while ago... I hope the person is still the one :)
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Jieranai Maier
Date: 5/22/2017 11:59:00 PM
Thank you very much Darren for your welcome and encouragement. You are so sweet. I read your poems too, you are talented. Best Wishes.
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