You Are So Far, Yet So Near

Underneath the bright moon-light The stars glittering on the sky, I alone with a phone in hand Awaiting for a ring. It's like an unseen shadow Which lies within us, It's like a new-born stream Which flows before us. The distance is no matter, The language is not burden, No matter how much tired we are, No matter how much busy we are. That sound of hushed laughter Over phone, A sweet, melodious sound from far, Seems so near and close to my heart. Minutes into hours over phone Fills me and my empty heart. It's like a new adventure, The time for you and me, Dancing the rhythm of Love over phone Which overwhelmed me. I love you much than The sun loves the moon. Much than the sea loves The sound of a river.

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Date: 3/23/2012 10:06:00 AM
Very touching Ilike it. Thank you for your comments om my poem. I will be writing more.
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/23/2012 10:33:00 AM
Thank you. Your encouragement is deeply appreciated.
Date: 3/21/2012 11:34:00 PM
Near, yet far, quite bittersweet. I hope you will meet soon. Nice write! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem today. Caroline.
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/22/2012 12:20:00 AM
Enjoying your so crafted comment. Thank you with all my heart.
Date: 3/21/2012 9:48:00 PM
'I love you much than the sun loves the moon,much than the sea loves the sound of a river' Very romantic and profound poetry.. A phone call away and many distances.. lovely-Charma
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/21/2012 9:52:00 PM
Thank you my dear writer with all my heart for this comment.
Date: 3/21/2012 8:46:00 PM
Beautifully written, filled with passion <3 -Lily <3
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Date: 3/21/2012 9:53:00 PM
Lovely this is for me. Thank you comment on my poem.
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