You Are Not Here

You are not here when I try to fall asleep at night
Alone in the bed where we held each other tight
You are not here when I wake up to a new day
Missing your laugh, your smile your special way
You are not here when I walk through our house
Where silence greets me quiet as a mouse
You are not here when I need someone to hold
To comfort my heart as moments grow cold
You are not here to share your kind gentle love
When I need it most I will gaze up above

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/2/2014 4:25:00 PM
Nicely written, you echo my sentiment.
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:03:00 PM
This one hit close to home ! Very comforting to know others out there going through the same thing, sad though! Check me out :)
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Date: 9/25/2014 8:27:00 PM
Nice win Betty,....Linda
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Date: 9/25/2014 2:48:00 AM
Congrats on ur top winning passionate write Betty! The last line just amazing!
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Date: 9/24/2014 11:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations on the big win. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/24/2014 5:03:00 PM
There truly is a sad message here. What is so effectyive about this poem is how closely you appear to identify with it. It sounds like this is exactly what happened to you. Jim Horn
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Date: 9/24/2014 5:00:00 PM
a poignant one. BIG congrats for your top win.
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Date: 9/24/2014 3:23:00 PM
Stopping back with congratulations...hugs Tim
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Date: 9/24/2014 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations, a very beautiful touching poem.
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Date: 9/24/2014 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful Couplet Betty. I can relate so well to your poem and it moved me deeply.
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Date: 9/24/2014 4:54:00 AM
many congrats on your top spot in Freddie's contest - dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2014 1:01:00 PM
how poignant this sense of longing,betty.. so lovely.. huggs
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Date: 9/13/2014 10:30:00 PM
good crafting...with strong adherence of in-depth journey
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Date: 9/4/2014 5:57:00 PM
Betty what a touching poem...He will be waiting for you....hugs Tim
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Date: 9/4/2014 5:54:00 PM
Beautifully written.
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Date: 9/4/2014 3:45:00 PM
A tender touching write that is so sad at the end. I am sure many can relate to this beautiful poem:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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