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You Are My Everything

You are my everything You can't leave me alone I know just for a while you are gone But keep informing me about you Cause its very dreadful to wait alone I want to see your face Only I know its beauty and grace You're my life, my soul Of someone else there's no space I only know you're mine You're my apple, I'm your mela-pine My life is nothing without you Talk to me or give some sign

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/22/2014 2:58:00 AM

beautifully crafted piece

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/5/2014 2:06:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Owais - I choose your first lovely written poem- You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/5/2014 10:01:00 AM

Excellent write - beautiful piece! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Owais! Happy writings! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 9/4/2014 2:26:00 PM

Love it - well done! Hi Owais, welcome to PoetrySoup! Kika

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/4/2014 12:16:00 PM

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