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You Are Like a Storm

Pain is within me, Pulsating all over my body, Burning like wildfires, Discovering my hidden desires. You are like a storm, My superman is born, Exploring the unknown, From sunrise till dawn. Can’t control the feeling inside, Can’t resist without you by my side, You are like a roller coaster, Heat bursting like a fever. Will it last for a lifetime? Will you be really mine? Or it will fade away in a flash? That in my dream anytime it will crash? August 27, 2016 All Rights Reserved 2016 MPS

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/5/2018 3:41:00 PM

Either way enjoy it for what it is and will eventually be. Another fine piece.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 3/15/2023 6:31:00 PM

thanks for passing by on my poem. Have a good day ;)

Len Gasun

Date: 10/18/2016 1:04:00 AM

What a lovely and passionate poem my dear friend. Thanks for sharing and stopping by my poem. God bless you, and Miss you too! Hugs!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/26/2016 12:13:00 AM

Merry Christmas and Best Wishes! Hugs!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 10/10/2016 2:40:00 AM

What a display of intense passions. Nice.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/17/2016 11:18:00 PM

thanks for passing by on my poem Scott ;) Good day

Michael Ainsley

Date: 9/2/2016 9:48:00 PM

You know that thoughts become things.We create our future out of whole thoughts.Thoughts that stay positive become reality .Thoughts that waver to and fro become a reality we do not recognize even though it also came from us. Now you know create your forever love or move a mountain if you please.Good thoughts always.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/17/2016 11:17:00 PM

thanks Michael ;) have anice day ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2016 12:51:00 PM

- Beautifully poem, Maria :) - A pleasure to read :) - No one knows what lasts forever - A pleasure to see you, hope all is well with you :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/28/2016 9:07:00 AM

hello my friend ;) been so long to visit ps for I am so busy and lazy too ;) thanks for always the first to comment on my poem...Have a nice day always.. hugs from the land of smile..Maria