Bukang Liwayway Poet Rhyme

You Are Like a Storm

Pain is within me,
Pulsating all over my body,
Burning like wildfires,
Discovering my hidden desires.

You are like a storm,
My superman is born,
Exploring the unknown,
From sunrise till dawn.

Can’t control the feeling inside,
Can’t resist without you by my side,
You are like a roller coaster,
Heat bursting like a fever.

Will it last for a lifetime?
Will you be really mine?
Or it will fade away in a flash?
That in my dream anytime it will crash?


August 27, 2016
All Rights Reserved 2016
MPS

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Richard Lamoureux February 5, 2018 at 3:41 PM Either way enjoy it for what it is and will eventually be. Another fine piece. Bukang Liwayway March 15, 2023 at 6:31 PM thanks for passing by on my poem. Have a good day ;)

Len Gasun October 18, 2016 at 1:04 AM What a lovely and passionate poem my dear friend. Thanks for sharing and stopping by my poem. God bless you, and Miss you too! Hugs! Len Gasun December 26, 2016 at 12:13 AM Merry Christmas and Best Wishes! Hugs!

Scott Thirtyseven October 10, 2016 at 2:40 AM What a display of intense passions. Nice. Bukang Liwayway October 17, 2016 at 11:18 PM thanks for passing by on my poem Scott ;) Good day

Michael Ainsley September 2, 2016 at 9:48 PM You know that thoughts become things.We create our future out of whole thoughts.Thoughts that stay positive become reality .Thoughts that waver to and fro become a reality we do not recognize even though it also came from us. Now you know create your forever love or move a mountain if you please.Good thoughts always. Bukang Liwayway October 17, 2016 at 11:17 PM thanks Michael ;) have anice day ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen August 27, 2016 at 12:51 PM - Beautifully poem, Maria :) - A pleasure to read :) - No one knows what lasts forever - A pleasure to see you, hope all is well with you :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bukang Liwayway August 28, 2016 at 9:07 AM hello my friend ;) been so long to visit ps for I am so busy and lazy too ;) thanks for always the first to comment on my poem...Have a nice day always.. hugs from the land of smile..Maria