For The Metaphor Cup Poetry Contest sponsored by Christopher Delegans
you are a gentle breeze a cocktail with antifreeze an approaching sneeze or a winter storm three standard deviations from the norm four sheets to the wind and I think your rook is pinned are you a ghostly mist or a clenched fist? I know you are a metaphor I don't know what for
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