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You are a Metaphor

you are a gentle breeze a cocktail with antifreeze an approaching sneeze or a winter storm three standard deviations from the norm four sheets to the wind and I think your rook is pinned are you a ghostly mist or a clenched fist? I know you are a metaphor I don't know what for

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Date: 6/28/2025 9:00:00 PM
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. I don't what the metaphor is for either. But it sure is hilarious, David. Cheers, Gershon
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David Crandall
Date: 6/29/2025 10:44:00 AM
haha, glad you enjoyed it Gershon! If I keep working on these metaphors, one day, I'll get them right.

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