You are a Metaphor
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For You are a Metaphor Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand
you are a gentle breeze
a cocktail with antifreeze
an approaching sneeze
or a winter storm
three standard deviations from the norm
four sheets to the wind
and I think your rook is pinned
are you a ghostly mist
or a clenched fist?
I know you are a metaphor
I don't know what for
Copyright © David Crandall | Year Posted 2025
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