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You are a star that changed my life from dim to light A queen who captivates hearts in the kingdom of beauty You made me think about you all day and night Being your servant for the rest of life is my holy duty You are a talented archer and I am your victim I failed to escape your arrows that made me fall in love Though they hit me , they brought me nothing but vim As on seeing your face , I feel being in the heaven above Maybe these arrows killed me and that power is fake As on being a martyr of love , life and death are the same Maybe it's a long dream and I don't want to be awake I feel I am a child who is attracted to an entartaining game You are a curse from satan , No you are a divine bless I don't know , but because of you , I am in a wonderful mess By: A. Badr

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Date: 9/2/2014 7:16:00 AM
Hey Ahmed, you're in love, no doubt :P... Nice poem, I like the rhyme and the word choice.// Blackmatta
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:02:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
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Ahmed Badr
Date: 7/26/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thanks kika :)

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