You Are

You are a star that changed my life from dim to 
light
A queen who captivates hearts in the kingdom of 
beauty
You made me think about you all day and night
Being your servant for the rest of life is my holy 
duty

You are a talented archer and I am your victim
I failed to escape your arrows that made me fall in 
love
Though they hit me , they brought me nothing but 
vim
As on seeing your face , I feel being in the heaven 
above

Maybe these arrows killed me and that power is 
fake
As on being a martyr of love , life and death are the 
same
Maybe it's a long dream and I don't want to be 
awake
I feel I am a child who is attracted to an 
entartaining game

You are a curse from satan , No you are a divine 
bless
I don't know , but because of you , I am in a 
wonderful mess

By: A. Badr
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Matta Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Hey Ahmed, you're in love, no doubt :P... Nice poem, I like the rhyme and the word choice.// Blackmatta
Ayala Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 4:02 PM
Beautiful, romantic, inspirational write that I enjoyed reading! Best wishes.
Badr Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 5:14 PM
Thanks kika :)
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