You Are

You are the apple of my eye 
And the blood that runs through my veins
You are the passion that I always wanted 
And the love I never had
You are the sea and I am the wind 
And together we create a storm
I think I once felt this way 
But with you, I feel love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 12:52 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 11, 2016 at 8:42 AM
Hi Vanessa, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Vanessa, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
Kithinji Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 5:32 PM
When the storm calms down, love soars!
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 5:04 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning Vanessa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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