You Are

Your words Are music to me Your laugh Is joy to me Your face Is beautiful to me Your smile Is the sun to me Your sadness Is my cross to bear Your hope Is my tangible piece of you Your effort Is the world to me Your friendship Is the air I breathe Your love Is my heart, my soul, my life

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Krissy B

Date: 12/15/2010 7:26:00 AM

Carol...thank you!! I hope you and your family have a wonderful holiday!!!

Krissy B

Date: 12/15/2010 7:25:00 AM

Eamon!! Thank you so much! Coming from you, that is high praise!! I hope all is well in your world and you and yours have a very Merry Christmas!!

Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/15/2010 7:09:00 AM

Hi Krissy. Thank you for your kind comment.This is a great write, a mantra of love. Pure emotion oozes from every line,summed up superbly in the final line, ' Your love Is my heart, my soul, my life'. Thanking you. Eamon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/15/2010 6:46:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Krissy. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)