You Are

You are the half that makes me whole
you are the beat in which keps my heart going
You are the finish to a long race
You are the music that fills my soul
You are the dreamer in my dream 
youre my all in all 
I love you so much
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Unknown Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 3:33 PM
this is a good poem...keep going, hope you keep writing poetry
Smith Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 2:41 PM
wow i love this poem it is so sweet and very original, i love the line you are my all in all, very clever! whoever this is is lucky to ahve you writing about them, this is really heartfelt and beautiful.Jo
Palli Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 11:41 AM
So romantic, I enjoyed that.
Patel Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 5:44 PM
Wonderfully described poem
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