You Are

You are the half that makes me whole you are the beat in which keps my heart going You are the finish to a long race You are the music that fills my soul You are the dreamer in my dream youre my all in all I love you so much

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Allison Unknown

Date: 3/5/2010 3:33:00 PM

this is a good poem...keep going, hope you keep writing poetry

Joanna Smith

Date: 3/4/2010 2:41:00 PM

wow i love this poem it is so sweet and very original, i love the line you are my all in all, very clever! whoever this is is lucky to ahve you writing about them, this is really heartfelt and beautiful.Jo

Susan Palli

Date: 3/3/2010 11:41:00 AM

So romantic, I enjoyed that.

Hina Patel

Date: 3/2/2010 5:44:00 PM

Wonderfully described poem