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You’re the one I like, You’re the one I want. You’re the one I will not taunt, Everyone’s nice, But you are as sweet as rice. Even if you are my kite. You make me wait for sunlight, For you to teach me. I am astonished by your beauty. And I am always by the hall, You are the one that looks like a doll. In the middle of fall, If you recall. I will miss you, Even if you turn blue. - Lorenzo Carty

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Date: 6/6/2009 7:45:00 PM
totally nice.
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:37:00 AM
Nice poem...Its very unique... Loves, Lexi
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Date: 5/8/2009 9:52:00 AM
This poem, in rhyme form, is a sweet declaraion of love. My favorite line is, "...the one I will not taunt..." Now that is friendship on a higher level. Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/6/2009 8:17:00 AM
Aww Beautiful. I love it!
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