You and I Are Not We But I

YOU AND I ARE NOT WE BUT I! -Dharga Nagar Safa Unscrew your mind, Screw into mine, In the pool of minds, Right is your's, Left is mine, Happiness is your's Sadness is mine, Day is your's, Night is mine, Taking is your's, Giving is mine, In the pool of minds, You and I are not we, But I.

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Sam Toil

Date: 4/18/2014 11:20:00 AM

Well put, Muhammad. The melding of two soles does not create a "we". It creates an "I". Just on a higher plane. Thanks for visiting my page. I notice on your page you write a lot of Haiku. I know nothing about Haiku. But I will take the opportunity to visit your page often to acquaint myself with that form of poetry. I hope we can become friends. :) Peace....Sam

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen
Date: 4/18/2014 11:39:00 AM

Very encouraging dear Sam,thanks!