You and I

BETWEEN YOU & I,

THERE IS A LOVE,

WHICH HAS BROUGHT A SPECIAL IMPORTANCE TO US,

I KNOW YOU LOVE ME ALOT.............

AND I TOO FEEL SAME FOR YOU,

THEN WHY YOU HIDE IT????????

EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS,

I WANNA FEEL IT,

YOU ARE MY DESIRE. FULFILL IT,

I JUST NEED IT........ I JUST NEED IT.............

                                                                                                  WRITTEN BY
                                                                                              (ARCHANA KARPE)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
August 22, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Karpe Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:45 AM
THANK YOU GUYS FOR APPRECIATING MY POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 8:58 PM
Love. powerful poem. Welcome to the soup
Rutherford Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 4:33 AM
Archana love and all that goes with it .like the line, 'You are my desire ,fulfill it'. note , change caps. lower case is better. Looking foreward to reading more of your work Anne
Brown Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 4:09 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Archana. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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