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You and I

I'm his creation so are you? I'm loved by him so are you? I smell roses and get giggling inside and my body embraces his reaction. I travel miles before you and he kept me safe all along. If I was a star I would say a prayer to luminate the world. My feet stand on earth, heaven and hell. You pick and choose your path. Where do you belong? Have you embrace eternity as a joke or has the joke become eternity. I will always be me and I know you will always be you. Until you meet him again embruger.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2016 9:25:00 PM

FLORENCE, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 5/8/2016 3:15:00 AM

FLORENCE, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/25/2011 3:22:00 PM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Florence. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 4/22/2011 1:25:00 PM

welcome to poetrysoup. enjoyed this read, it was different kind of poem to read.