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You and I Like two parallel lines we stride True, we can't collide But, at least, Can we not be side-by-side You and I Like two bicycle pedals we glide True, we can't be side-by-side But, at least, Can we not be in same ride You and I Like two jockeys, horses we astride True, we can't be on the same ride But, at least, Can we not be joint-winners to be race's pride You and I Only if we try...... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ By Hitendra Mehta For Members Contest - Poetry Panaroma by Linda Marie - The Sweetheart of P.S.)

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Date: 11/17/2010 9:53:00 PM
Hitendra, I just read what Linda told you below about this poem not fitting the rules of her contest. But you should enter it in some other contest when something comes up for which it applies because this is one of your best poems I have read. It is really clever and I like it a lot. LUv, Andrea Ps maybe use it for the big Soup contests sometime.
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Date: 11/14/2010 9:39:00 AM
No Hitendra I did not receive a Soup Mail from u as yet.. am having a party at my home today most of the day so will be on and off Soup today.. this is your entry for my Poetry Panorama contest but it does not reflect the subject of poetry.. would u perhaps have another piece to enter on the art of poetry or writing poetry? the theme is specific.. if u go back and look at the guidelines..luv.. thankxxx.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:54:00 PM
@ Carol - Thnx so very much 4 nice wishes. Life cannot but be beautiful always.... @ Linda - Thnx. So glad 4 picking up my favorite line ... parallel lines....stride.... Moving on is Life...Stagnation is Death @ Dr Ram - thnx 4 ur appreciation. Learning to create poetry out of feeling... Luv /Best wishes always....
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Date: 10/5/2010 11:00:00 AM
A pleasure to read your excellent poetry today Hitendra. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 7:38:00 AM
Excellent piece of poetry today my friend and u have expressed and impressed with your lines and verses... two parallel lines we stride.. some excellent points here luv..
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:24:00 AM
Very interesting write on why we can't be together, Hitendra. very creative one
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