You and I

You and i, 
caged in our separate lives. Eyes meet 
across the street. Strangers to each other. 
Mirrors reflecting these words. Yours and mine. 

Can you hear them? 

Swirling currents flowing past each other. 
The thunder of the water splashing 
on the rocks down below, drowning out 
all sound. And the songs You sing to me, 
and I to you, sink into the shadows 
until nothing is left. 


But down in the hollows, a hydra grows 
on our sorrows, feeding off these pipe dreams 
between Us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Reed Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 1:23 PM
I see the mirrors. I hear the sea crashing on the rocks. Smother the hydra. - Alan
Cobb Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 1:19 PM
i absolutely loved the way that this poem flowed. please keep writing more of them.
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June 11, 2010 at 12:07 PM
wow, lovely write, enjoyed ...P.D.
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